Blogger #2

Original #1:

Throughout my high school years, I met a lot of people mostly temporary and saw so many new faces. Also I had a lot of teachers, I can't forget them. Now I think about how my life would've been if I would of stay in the same high school seeing the same people for 4 years and graduating with them. Too see how things would've turned out. I’m glad now that it's all in the past. No more moving for me, hopefully.

Simple Sentences:

I met a lot of people mostly temporary and saw so many new faces. I had a lot of teachers. I can't forget them. Now I think about how my life would've been if I would of stay in the same high school seeing the same people for 4 years and graduating with them. Too see how things would've turned out. I’m glad now that it's all in the past. No more moving for me, hopefully.

Semicolons/Commas & FANBOYS:

Throughout my high school years; I met a lot of people mostly temporary and saw so many new faces. Also I had a lot of teachers, I can't forget them. Throughout my high school years, I met a lot of people mostly temporary and saw so many new faces. I had a lot of teachers, so I can't forget them. Now I think about how my life would've been if I would of stay in the same high school seeing the same people for 4 years and graduating with them. Too see how things would've turned out. I’m glad now that it's all in the past. No more moving for me; hopefully.

Original #2

Growing up as a kid was all fun and games, but when it came to moving, I disliked it a lot more than many people. Moving meant a new house, new friends, and a new school. The first thing that would come to my mind that we were moving as a kid you get angry at your parents, but I would just think about the new school, I was going to go to and new friends I had to make. Friends were important in those times, but now I don't have friends nor do I have care for them at all now, I’m a bit older. I can consider myself antisocial at times, this was caused by all that moving. I could picture myself in the class introducing myself to everyone that I didn’t know very nervously, you could tell I was nervous, by the way I was looking down and not making eye contract with any students. Then taking a seat in the back of the class, where I would usually always sit. It would also be the worst day of my life but I knew it was only going to be temporary and eventually, I’ll get over it. I was actually negative about moving. A conversation would start between my parents and I about the whole moving situation, they would just respond with, “You’ll make new friends”. They were actually right for the moment, I would end up making more temporary friends. As I started moving more it became temporary to make friends because I knew I was never going to see the people at my temporary school.

Simple Sentences:

Growing up as a kid was all fun and games. Moving meant a new house, new friends, and a new school. The first thing that would come to my mind that we were moving as a kid you get angry at your parents. I would just think about the new school I was going to go to. Friends were important in those times. I don't have friends nor do I have care for them at all now. I’m older. I can consider myself antisocial at times. I could picture myself in the class introducing myself to everyone that I didn’t know very nervously. You could tell I was nervous. I was looking down and not making eye contract with any students. Then taking a seat in the back of the class. Where I would usually always sit. It would also be the worst day of my life. I knew it was only going to be temporary. I’ll get over it. I was actually negative about moving. A conversation would start between my parents and I about the whole moving situation, they would just respond with, “You’ll make new friends”. I would end up making more temporary friends. As I started moving more it became temporary to make friends because I knew I was never going to see the people at my temporary school.

Semicolons/Commas & FANBOYS:

Growing up as a kid was all fun and games, but when it came to moving, I disliked it a lot more than many people. Moving meant; a new house, new friends, and a new school. The first thing that would come to my mind that we were moving as a kid you get angry at your parents, but I would just think about the new school, I was going to go to and new friends I had to make. Friends were important in those times, but now I don't have friends nor do I have care for them at all now, I’m a bit older. I can consider myself antisocial at times, this was caused by all that moving. I could picture myself in the class introducing myself to everyone that I didn’t know very nervously, you could tell I was nervous, by the way I was looking down and not making eye contract with any students. Then taking a seat in the back of the class, where I would usually always sit. It would also be the worst day of my life but I knew it was only going to be temporary and eventually, I’ll get over it. I was actually negative about moving. A conversation would start between my parents and I about the whole moving situation, they would just respond with; “You’ll make new friends”. They were actually right for the moment, I would end up making more temporary friends. As I started moving more it became temporary to make friends because I knew I was never going to see the people at my temporary school.