“You
have to see the people who you are friends with”, she said looking at me with a
serious face. “Many of those people that you consider your friends come out to
be nobody in your life. Also, you have to realize that society will always
criticize, judge, discriminate, be against, and even disappoint you. But keep
in mind that nobody has power over you. You have to learn how you make the
decisions that you know will make you a better person. Your parents will always
be there for you, and they will always guide you through the right paths.”
Simple Sentences
You
have to see the people who you are friends with. she said looking at me with a
serious face. Many of those people that you consider your friends come out to
be nobody in your life. you have to realize that society will always
criticize judge discriminate be against and even disappoint you. keep
in mind that nobody has power over you. You have to learn how you make the
decisions. that you know will make you a better person. Your parents will always
be there for you.they will always guide you through the right paths.
Semicolons/Commas and FANBOYS
You
have to see the people who you are friends with;she said looking at me with a
serious face. Many of those people that you consider your friends come out to
be nobody in your life. Also, you have to realize that society will always
criticize, judge, discriminate, be against, and even disappoint you. But keep
in mind that nobody has power over you. You have to learn how you make the
decisions that you know will make you a better person. Your parents will always
be there for you, and they will always guide you through the right paths.
Original #2
This
is all she had to say to me. Those words meant a lot more than what they meant
for her. Here I was getting advice from the humble woman who came leaving her
parents and her hometown to give me a better future. Her desired was to see me
graduate from high school, and my goal was to make her proud. Today I am in
college, fighting for my goal to become a sign language interpreter. I identify
myself as a person who is determined to fight for their goals, to have a better
life and to show my mother that her advice was not taken for granted. Because
of that night were I was pretending to be concentrated in my homework, her
words helped me who I am now, and like she said society will always be against
you but it will never have power over me.
Simple Sentences
This
is all she had to say to me. Those words meant a lot more than what they meant
for her. I was getting advice from the humble woman who came leaving her
parents and her hometown to give me a better future. Her desired was to see me
graduate from high school.my goal was to make her proud. Today I am in
college.fighting for my goal to become a sign language interpreter. I identify
myself as a person who is determined to fight for their goals. to have a better
life and to show my mother that her advice was not taken for granted. Because
of that night were I was pretending to be concentrated in my homework.her
words helped me who I am now.like she said society will always be against
. it will never have power over me.
Semicolons/ Commas and FANBOYS
This
is all she had to say to me; those words meant a lot more than what they meant
for her. So, I was getting advice from the humble woman who came leaving her
parents and her hometown to give me a better future. Her desired was to see me
graduate from high school, and my goal was to make her proud. yet today I am in
college, fighting for my goal to become a sign language interpreter. I identify
myself as a person who is determined to fight for their goals, to have a better
life and to show my mother that her advice was not taken for granted. Because
of that night; were I was pretending to be concentrated in my homework, her
words helped me who I am now, and like she said society will always be against
you but it will never have power over me.
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